tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363006578033210197.post2155522434913546744..comments2023-10-15T13:09:39.469+01:00Comments on Tea and toast, darling?: oo-erKayteihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04812388144529087704noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363006578033210197.post-37300529601852389372009-05-18T20:50:00.000+01:002009-05-18T20:50:00.000+01:00i shall take your advice on board tommy...as long ...i shall take your advice on board tommy...as long as you promise you'll never ever describe anything as "super-duper" again!!!<br />xxxKayteihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04812388144529087704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363006578033210197.post-13628985154901479662009-05-18T18:44:00.000+01:002009-05-18T18:44:00.000+01:00ahh thanks for saying that!!ahh thanks for saying that!!Elliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02728231019233843224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7363006578033210197.post-40995496813565323752009-05-18T17:09:00.000+01:002009-05-18T17:09:00.000+01:00i'm awful with critisism, constructive or no...
a...i'm awful with critisism, constructive or no...<br /><br />all i would say is that maybe you might want to consider slowing the story down, just a bit, to add extra details or feeling. you know, to give the reader some more vision within your storyworld. but by all means, maybe im just looking at your story too much from my own writing style. do whatever works for you. what you've done is super-duper :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com